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Hello

Fri Apr 3, 2009, 11:00 PM
Greetings,

A little about me. I've been writing fanfictions for the past year and a half or so. Focusing on the Redwall series and the Chronicals of Narnia. Perusing through those stories eventually led me here to some of the great fanart people have done. While I do enjoy writing that is where my articist skills end. Thus, don't expect any drawings from me as I doubt it would be anything better than what you could find at you're local elementary school. I would be honored if you'd follow the link below to my fanfiction account and peruse those stories. I value any comments and constructive critisism.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat,
warrior

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:icontheolevine:
Excuse me, but my first story isn't getting much reviews as of late; it only has one review: yours. Any suggestions on getting more people to review my fanfic?
:iconwarrior4:
Unfortunatly no. There is no way to force anyone to review a story or chapter you post. And begging for reviews get's annoying really quick. You just have to post it and hope for the best.

Also may I ask you again, that if you have ffn related questions or the like, please use that site to contact me rather than DA. I'd very much like to keep my DA page for DA things and my ffn page for ffn things.
:icontheolevine:
I need to know something. What's the "blood channel" relating to Martin's sword. Just curious...
:iconwarrior4:
When someone refer's to a swords "blood channel" it's actually referning toa feature called the fuller. A blood channel didn't do anything to increase or decrease blood flow from a wound a sword caused. The fuller is a grooove running down the middle of the blade. The purpose of it is to decrease the weight of the sword while at the same time making it more flexible. I added it to my stories and called it a blood channel because that's how BJ described the Sword of Martin in the early Redwall books and Im a much bigger fan of the early Redwall books than the more recent ones.
:icontheolevine:
Just a tip for my novel's sequel; I'm starting it, but with the school year coming closer and closer...well I may have some interference. But I'm starting it today, with Prologue. I really recommend you read it. This one has another crossover, with a legend that we commonly adore.
:icontheolevine:
Got the prologue in. Starting first chapter, and I already have your advice up-to-date
:icontheolevine:
By the way, the bold and italics in the text; they were like that. I didn't know then, nor did I out them there. I forgot to edit them out. I'm doing it right now.
:icontheolevine:
When you reviewed my story, you mention Mary-Sues and Marty-Stus. Which characters were you referring to?
:icontheolevine:
Thank you, warrior4. I'll take this advice to heart.
:icontheolevine:
I finished my story. You can read it anytime you want. If it has any pleasantry, just review and recommend this to any others.

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